IMPROVING your writing composition

I love One Direction, it´s my favorite group of music. I think they sing very well and I love their songs. The members of the group are: Harry Styles, Louis Tomlinson, Niall Horan, Liam Payne and Zayn Malik. My favorite singer is Harry. They are from Britain, except Niall, who is from Ireland. They play pop music. All they can play the guitar, and Louis can play also the piano. My favorite album is “Take me home”, it´s fantastic. I love all the songs, but my favorite one is “Kiss you”.

ONE DIRECTION

I love One Direction, it´s my favorite group of music. I thing they sing very well and I love their songs. The members of the group are: Harry Styles, Louis Tomlinson, Niall Horan, Liam Payne and Zayn Malik. My favorite singer is Harry. They are from Britain, except Niall that is from Ireland. They play pop music. They all know to play the guitar and Louis can play the piano. My favorite album is Take me home, and it´s fantastic. I love all the song but my favorite is Kiss you.

IMPROVE YOUR WRITTING COMPOSITION

I played in a volleyball team for two months and it was great.

I played volleyball in the school, I was there for two months. We trained on Mondays and on Wednesdays, and sometimes we trained on Fridays. I loved it, but we were very bad, and we had to train a lot, in the end, we became a good team, and we could play very well. I think it was a good experience.

A GREAT EXPERIENCE

I have been in a volleyball team for two months and it was great.
I played volleyball in the school, I have been there for two months. We train the mondays and the wednesday, and sometime we train the fridays. I love it, but we were very baad, and we have to train a lot, at the end, we were a good team, and we play very good. I think it was a good experience.

MY FAVOURITE PLACE

My favourite place is Almeria. I love its beaches. My favourite beach is near "Cabo de Gata". It´s a very beautiful beach, and colourful because there are a lot of different types of plants and animals, and it´s also lively. It´s peaceful because there aren´t many people, because nobody knows it. Also it is sandy. Near the beach there are mountains, and you can walk in the paths of these mountains and go to other beaches.

In the beach you can swim, do sandcastles, take photos... There are also restaurants and bars, and you can walk around the city, because it´s a very beautiful city.

HI EVERIONE!

 Hi!
Sorry, last month I didn´t write because I was in Portugal. It was amazing. The people is very nice, they always says: please, thanks and sorry. We visited a lot of monuments, an aquarium and a lot of museums. The city is very beautiful, we visit it, and there are a lot of beaches, I swam in a lot of beaches, but it was very cold and the water was cold too. We ate in a lot of restaurants. We use the car to go to Lisbon and the underground to visit the city. The hotel was fantastic, one think I don´t like is that all the people speak in Portuguese. But the travel was fantastic!